Feedback on my book's introduction, scale of 0-10

Just uploaded a PDF to FileDrop. I've gone through this intro a bunch of times, and my book is now around 130 pages. Writing it has been a huge exercise for me since I originally had over 500 pages before cutting out tons of unnecessary stuff. I sometimes keep the ideas, but my brain gets flooded with them, and now with the tech available, I can express my thoughts much clearer. Honestly, I’m not too bothered about losing some ideas since I can always find them again as I keep writing. I'm still considering whether to include the federal deficit and M2 stats in the intro, or if I should just shuffle some chapters. Anyway, hope you enjoy reading it. I’d love a rating from 0 to 10. Right now, I feel like I’d give myself a 7.5 or 8 out of 10, but I have a feeling that future me won’t agree with that. P.S. If the PDF looks a bit off, try zooming in. When I zoomed to 140% on my iPhone 13, it looked super sharp. INTRODUCTION This book makes the case that Bitcoin isn’t just some speculative fad, it’s not a financial bubble, and definitely not a Ponzi scheme. It’s actually the most logical outcome of humanity’s long history with information management systems. The fact that many people jump to calling it a "Ponzi scheme" instead of a "pyramid scheme" shows just how much emotion is clouding their judgment. We're talking about a legacy that goes way back, way before B.

I don’t know if I’m the only one with this issue or maybe it might be from your site or so but I have been on this your link page for some minutes now but it just keep loading and loading and nothing is reflecting to me. Wanted going through your book even reduced and increases the quality you mentioned but still nothing is showing it just keep loading and loading.  But don’t know maybe this is just displaying that way on my side alone maybe if some other users try to go check it out then they might come back with feedbacks.

Yeah my bad. to fix it I just updated the post with the text by copy pasting it in there. Should've done it earlier. Anyway upon reading it twice myself I noticed some errors like when naming El Salvador (supposed to be the exception of that government argument I made the sentence before) Aswel as some other small stuff. Anyway thanks for even trying though!!! Appreciate it a lot

We should not conclude that it is our network that is causing the issue. Sometimes website usually have technical problems, or the server may be overloaded, especially when many people are accessing the page at the same time. If the page is loading endlessly, the best thing that can help at that moment is to try another browser, switch network, clear cache, or wait for another time before trying. But if other users are facing similar issues then the problem is eventually coming from the site and the owner of the site needs to do something about it.